My pleasure, dude! I'm on it!
Right on Chris!
It's good to see you studying anatomy. I think you still need to do more research where the torso and arms are concerned though, because the torso and arm at the top of your second page (to the right of the eyeball drawing) isn't correct--particularly where the deltoid connects up with the bicep. Here's an "overlay" image for you with some notes that might prove helpful. I encourage you to seek out some anatomy books that might prove helpful. In this case, you might want to pick up a copy of HUMAN ANATOMY FOR ARTISTS, THE ELEMENTS OF FORM, by Eliot Goldfinger. It's one of the books that taught me a lot about upper body anatomy and function.
Hope this PS "overlay" helps:
And this image might also help some as well:
Loston "I'm only "Bruce" to the noobs" Wallace
Wow Loston ...I'm thanking you..this will help me out also