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    Page 1 of a 10 page short story

    Using a friend's writing, I drew a short story - here is page 1
    Feedback would be appreciated - thanks

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    Be clear, get the message across, thats your first job. When you go with that much detail, line weight it's important to separare planes. Zoom out to stamp size, does it read well, or it becames grey noise? Take a look at Moebius work, see how he plays with line thickness and open spaces for better reading. Tried to push the background a little by making the line thinner. Hope it helps.

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    Cool - Thanks for the info/advice


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