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    G.I.Joe practice

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    Monkey with Crayons [Moderator] Veritas71's Avatar
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    Tell the story first. Right now, I'm not sure what's going on. I would recommend not overlapping the panels so much to help with clarity. Also if this is the 1st page, I would recommend an establishing shot to tell us where we are.
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    Sgt Rock...would be a good place to study what your going for..The Basic Rules..PAY ATTENTION EASY>>>Rule Number 1.. Keep it Simple...Rule 2...Keep It Interesting....Rule 3 Don't get Too artsy we the Reader fall out of the Story...4...Make us want too Turn the Page!...Chris has hit the nail...go from there...This is a Combat Art all around
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