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    Page 2 of a 10 page short story

    This is Page 2 of a 10 page short story using a former friend's philosophical writing.
    I removed the word bubbles for viewing.
    Feedback will be appreciated.


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    Okay: so here you've got more separation and variation than in your "Synforma" page, and it DOES work better……don't you think? I can really feel the masses of the creatures in the bottom panel, and I think it's the shadows that does that, and their tonal separation from the background.

    You've really got a knack there for these sic-fi gadget-ish details. It even makes me think of Kirby (those creatures on the bottom, there).


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