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    revenger page 18 lay out

    here is my rough for page 18 of issue two of my homemade comic, revenger.

    any advice before i continue? the large panel in the middle will have lots of dialogue.

    other pages can be seen here. https://delaneyclark.deviantart.com/.../revenger-no-2

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    Great instincts! Solid storytelling. Your work would make great layouts. It's just missing that final polishing. Your definitely putting it all together. Using reference, life drawing, sketching scenery wherever you go, and drawing backgrounds, angles, and figure cropping from movies and tv might help you get to that polished level. I would love to see the progress you make in the next few issues! Your storytelling is easy to follow and it is HIGHLY impressive that you even drew so many pages! Looking forward to your future pages!

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    Hope not too much dialog...You did so well covering the BG...
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    actually that is 17. here is plan for 18 and i will sketch 19 in next couple days before drawing them.
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    here is page 19 layouts

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    hahahaha...Never miss a trick
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    pencils for page 17

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