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    You might want to go wide with a few shots to show more atmosphere for where they are. The medium to close up shots leave me a bit clostrophobic. You might want to go wide and long every other page just to mix it up a bit.

    I like the style. A lot. Keep it up. Just try to mix it up a bit shotwise to show a little more atmosphere. Keep up the great work.

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    Lots of potential here... enjoyed reading..
    as for crits, won't comment on nitpicks.. but one thing that sidetracked me from the flowy reading was the top down shot, the standing guy looks way too small. (Compare his head size for example)

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    Thanks for your help guys! I see it all now and will keep it in mind for the future.

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