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    Page 5

    Page 5 of my graphic novel. She's in shadow, so you wont be able to see anything. I'm going for a classy sexyness but also a bit of a unique setting.
    I got the idea when I was in a FAR infared sauna and afterwards I saw a himalayan salt lamp. So I combined those 2 elements thinking she is "detox/life pulsing" after a mission. Thought it might be cool.

    If anyone has any suggestions feel free to throw em out there.

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    as messy as this is...Digital?....
    Keep that Pencil Busy!

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    It's pencil with a bit of ink. They are layered in photoshop to play with ideas,make composition/storytelling adjustments,and correct mistakes. This is basically a thumbnail that, when finished I can print out, put under a light box and do a final render. I'm keeping it loose to keep the ''life'' to the lines so they don't get to stiff.

    That's my idea anyway.

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    Proportion-wise, her neck is a little long. 8 heads tall. Top half goes: Top of head to chin, chin to nipple, nipple to navel/rib cage, navel to crotch.

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    Good eye Veritas. Take 2: I also shadowed the foreground in panel 1. Looking to go easy on the eye....

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    That second panel needs the pose to either:

    A- Look like she is standing there but more alerted to the thingamabob alerting her.

    B- A pose of her in more of a walking pose to help the transition between this and the next panel.

    Nice work. I like it. Just some small tweaks transition-wise.

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    Appreciate that Eddie. Glad you mentioned it.

    *points finger* Take 3:

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    Nice improvement! Thanks! You made me feel like an editor.

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