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    Neophyte ayalpinkus's Avatar
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    Short comic for a 404 page

    I thought it would be fun to do a short comic for my 404 (page not found) page. Feedback much appreciated, especially tips on coloring, but all advice is very welcome.


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    Straight Outta a Comic Book [SUPPORTER] Symson's Avatar
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    nice! Good character design and reads well!

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    @Symson, @crazyjedichicken, thank you so much for your kind words!

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    LOL, I chuckled. that's pretty funny. I think though, to hit the joke home it might be funnier if in the final panel Lavender mouse is looking at yellow mouse with the very expression you feel when you yourself run into that error, rather than down looking off-panel. Otherwise good idea.

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    Good concept, cute characters
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    This is charming Ayalpinkus. I think you have something here.

    Maybe they look down and see ''the page devourer!"

    And it's a big nasty cat...munch munch....he sniffs the air...turns his head... looks up at them and squints his eyes....

    "chezzits!! he's spotted us!! gain altitude! GAIN ALTITUDE!!!!

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