I find post 18 to be a more interesting angle.
Everyone has their own style. Ya gotta let people play if you want their best stuff. Feel free to tell me to go suck a rotten egg if you like but, I think you need to tweak the head.
I should've noticed earlier. Maybe it was the wireframe and lack thereof later but i'd:
Drop the brow
Drop the nose
Lift the mouth
Shorten the chin