iIt would help if you numbered the pages, to save scrolling back and forth to check what page it is.
I know the rules say 'try not to post more than 5 pages' but this one is only 7. Seemed like a waste to split it into a 3 and 4 page post but I'm more than willing to edit it and do so if needed. Just need a moderator to let me know.
This is for a project I'm asked not to name at this time. I didn't write it. Just did the art.
Critiques are welcome. I don't have time to change these but I can certainly apply them to future art.
Last edited by VagabondX; 03-26-2017 at 07:32 PM.
I'm not sure if they want page numbers on the actual pages but I added some to the post, at least.