Concrete 2 Pager
Did this small 2 pager, "script" and art by me.
Critiques are welcome, any suggestions are helpful!
Last edited by Pete Tha Creep; 03-24-2017 at 07:17 PM.
Looks great pete! Page one is super strong, solid composition and layout, it reads really well and Concrete's pose on the first panel is really well done.
page 2 would be better imho if that power button was a little clearer, or maybe read a little better if you had him just simply removing it?
Really nice though.
Thanks for the crit man, really appreciated! You're right about the power button, that should be an easy fix.