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    Concrete 2 Pager

    Did this small 2 pager, "script" and art by me.
    Critiques are welcome, any suggestions are helpful!




    Last edited by Pete Tha Creep; 03-24-2017 at 07:17 PM.
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    Looks great pete! Page one is super strong, solid composition and layout, it reads really well and Concrete's pose on the first panel is really well done.

    page 2 would be better imho if that power button was a little clearer, or maybe read a little better if you had him just simply removing it?

    Really nice though.
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    Thanks for the crit man, really appreciated! You're right about the power button, that should be an easy fix.
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