This should really either be 2 separate posts or be in the Hype section. If you want the pages to be crit'd then hey, this is the right place but if the whole point is the pitch, then it should be over there.
For an actual crit, I'll keep it light since I'm not sure that's really what you're here for. Your draftsmanship is good but your anatomy and perspective is all over the place. That typeface is really hard to read.
Also, which member of the team are you? You really should be posting your contribution or if you're not doing pencils, make it clear that these are your finishes over DeFoy's.. The forum has a rule about posting the work of others for crit, so just try to make sure you're following the guidelines.