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    Official Sequential League Sign Up Thread (March script now up)

    Alright folks, here it is, the official Sequential League. The rules are as follows:

    1. All participants will draw three pages from the chosen script and turn them in no later than the 22nd of every month at 11:59 PM EASTERN time.

    2. It is up to each participant how complete they want to make the pages up to colors. NO LETTERING. Your work will be judged on the art only and LETTERED PAGES WILL NOT BE INCLUDED IN THE POLL.

    3. There are no ranks. If your entry wins, it gets used in the community project. If it doesn't, you have something for your portfolio. Simple as that.

    4. Winning entries that are penciled only will be moved forward in a competition for inkers and then one for colorists.

    5. You are not allowed to vote for yourself. If you submit an entry, I would suggest not voting but it's up to you if you want to vote for someone else.

    So there you have it. Our first competition will be in the month of February and the current script is member Brokenhill's Commie Zombies From Outer Space. This is an ongoing project so we will not be beginning the competition with the first pages of the script. I will post the pages that are in progress right now along with a brief description before posting the script for the three pages for February next week.
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    The story and prologue:

    The time is 2019 ,Its been 9 years scents the Commie Zombie’s came from outer space.They came by the thousand’s landing on all parts of the earth.Some nations welcomed them big mistake They overran them that much more easily .Most nations that fought, fought hard ,but it was almost a complete losing battle.The US had to move all its government to California that was president schwarzenegger decree .There they built a huge wall and any citizens that could make were told to make there way in before it was too late. This process repeated it self over and over the world as nations backed them selves into corners like frighten animals.
    But out there outside the walls were groups of people ,Hard ass people that weren’t going to be pushed around,That said enough is enough.And they fought back.
    With everything they had.
    This is their story .

    How the CZFOS came to be .

    It was 1969 and while the US pursued the dream of getting to the moon.the Soviets Union followed theirs .
    Slowly ,little be little . Every time the sent up a “satellite “
    It was in realty a frozen cosmonaut .after they had 20 cosmonauts orbiting the earth they put the second part of there plan into effect.all the ship’s merged into one huge ship .And off it went Towards A distant planet only the soviets had found.
    Little did the frozen cosmonauts know what lay ahead.
    When the ship crashed landed on the planet of Zombies.
    At first they feared for there lives.After all seeing 9ft tall half dead zombies walking around can scare the shit out of ya. Soon they were brought before the leaders.And
    That’s when the began the tale of how and why the had
    Arrived on the world.But what most intrigued the leaders
    Was how Communism worked .And at that they marveled
    The most .almost instantly they reworked the society to be a perfect model of Communism . The crew cooperated fully with the remolding of their society .And when it was done Cosmonauts sat back and smiled for it soo beautiful to them.But their happiness’ was short lived .
    The leaders hungered for for more,More than the could have ever dreamed of in their worst nightmares. They wanted to know about Earth and its billon’s of inhabitants .That’s when they hatched there invasion plan.

    The cast of characters:

    “ MORGANZA” 7’ 7” of Nordic Knockdown. Huge brute of a man .Think , Doc savage meets Thor.Use a 900lb ship anchor chain as weapon.

    “Lost- Sparten” mysterious man from what used to be
    Canada.Fly around in a cross between a Apache copter and a tank.

    “ BRUCE LEE” master of Jeet -kon -do .two robotic forearms. Think karnak meets the Cybog guy from teen-titians(comic book) uses Nanotec nun- chucks. 100.000 volts shots though them.And it turns on and off evertime the touch his hands or body.
    “MECH -ANGLE” Transformer type with huge wings.
    She slash the CZ with these .She gives them Salvation ,Right too HELL.

    “ MR-HADES” He’s got that grin ,That says TIME TO DIE!. Has A army of small and larger robots that do his biding. Fav saying “ SMEG” wears a modified out back duster.lot’s of internal pockets.

    “ FLAVOR + KD”
    F LAVOR’s the MARINE .Born again Hard.Drives a 6ton
    Hardened Military wrecker .With twin 20mil cannons on the roof.
    “KD” is FLAVORS nephew. Street tuff Crazy ass good driver. Think the TRANSPORTER meets Fast a Furious.
    Armour plated tuner with ground effects and twin 30 cal s Also lays mines.

    The art so far:

    Cover (art by Brokenhill)



    Prologue (art by KrisDiaz)



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    Pages 1 and 2 (art by Brokenhill):





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    Okay, that's the art so far. There are a few other pages but they are random ones and these are at least in order so you all can get a feel for the story.

    The following are Brokenhill's original sketches for character and vehicle designs:





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    Descriptions and guide sheets:





    “Lost- Sparten” mysterious man from what used to be
    Canada.Fly around in a cross between a Apache copter and a tank.




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    “ FLAVOR + KD”
    F LAVOR’s the MARINE .Born again Hard.Drives a 6ton
    Hardened Military wrecker .With twin 20mil cannons on the roof.
    “KD” is FLAVORS nephew. Street tuff Crazy ass good driver. Think the TRANSPORTER meets Fast a Furious.
    Armour plated tuner with ground effects and twin 30 cal s Also lays mines.










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    Do we have character sheets for the characters needed. Just for the sake of continuity between artists.
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    Some notes on the Commie Zombies: The tubes that are connected directly to the head are feeding the brain blood. The blood spikes are hollow, metal tubes that feed the blood into the suit and the suit has a blood distribution mechanism. Once the brain has been collected and the side chambers are filled with blood (so that the brain can be kept fresh), the suit sends the rest of the blood to the commie zombie in order to keep its brain alive.
    The tubes behind the head in the helmet are communication speakers for commands given to the zombies by the Zombas.
    Also, breaking the zombie's helmet does not kill them. They still need to have their brain destroyed in order to be killed.
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